FeedBack

We had our presentation yesterday to showcase our work to the AV pathway group. The presentation went well and the people in the AVgroup seemed to like the Documentary. They thought we could have had a shot of Chris in a lecture to show the side of him doing work. We found that we could not meet up becuase he was too busy at the time to meet up again. One of the lecturers said they like the documnetary but they have seen this idea done a few times. Feedback is good to have becuase when you have to do a similiar project we will take into account the feedback.

Ambience Track

Today we shown a Lecturer rough final edit for feeback. He mentioned that we need a ambience track to fill in the dead spaces of sound to keep the audio running smoothly when the Character isnt talking. This was needed when we filmming out side. Also he said we needed to change the shot quicker when we were in the radio studio to make it look faster to fit in with th music.

COMIC STRIP

These are the three comic strips that I came up with to show the progression in the documentary.

Script in footage

Couple of hours see yea, starting off with this one, its my-sound-through (not sure what song he says)


2.10 – small documentary on rave Trent, so there here with me for the evening, just for fly FM, Their going to be coming down to rave Trent, also checking one of our socials, so hopefully we will have that online for you in the next few weeks, you can check that out, yea like I say rolling on with the next one. The next tune coming in is _________ - freefall

7.20- what am I doing tonight?
Well errrr, each week on fly fm we have a radio show, which we rotated between 4 residences down at rave Trent. It should be me and another lad this evening between 6 till 9pm should be another lad here with me this evening but his tied up with work being 4th year that we are you know. Pressures of the university stuff, but errmmm, each week on the show best to have a variety on fly fm. Many day time shows. Not many specialist evening.

12min .00- to be fair this is the first show I have done this year, so I’ve yet to find out how am going to balance it, but I suppose you got to put work before play at time so you make sure you freed up your time to do what you want do, so obviously this is a hobby of mine.

THIS IS NOT ALL THE SCRIP

First Edit

Plan
Today we would like to finalise editing process and try and cut the footage form 45 minutes down to 10 or under. We to get all the main points of the documentary within the 10 minute then hopefully in the next session try and cut it down to 5 minute.

We have also decided to produce a sort of story board using screen shots so it looks like a comic strip, also for my personnel use I want to turn this in to a short version of the of the documentary making it look like a comic in motion.



This is an example of a comic strip from spiderman.