Script

From the feedback from my first script from my lecturer. I decided to completely change my story completely. The feed was helpful and was an awakening for me becuase I felt with the original script I was a little held back and so I thought i would be a little dearing in my new script.

Script extract

Gary

I…

DOLL

You need me Martin. With out me 

they wont stop.

Silence

You need to do it. I told you before what 

as to be done. 

Gary

Leave me alone! (Shouts)

He picks up the doll and throws it away. Gary closes his eyes and starts muttering to him self. 

…I can’t let it happen, I wont let him

do it. He won’t do it

Silence

The Doll is back on the desk in front of him

DOLL

Martin. I see you have been busy…

Gary

Where did you get that?

Gary notices bloody knife in front of him on the desk.

DOLL

So you did it then?

Gary looks away not wanting to see it. Faint scream it heard. The screen flickers to an image of a knife being held by someone.