Feedback 1

After showing a near full edit to some lecturers the other day, there were a few things they suggested. He said that there was not enough pace to the film and that some of shots could be shortened. Also because there was no voice for the Doll it was hard to get a sense of the story. Also with out the voice I myself could time the shots right so to show a fluid conversation between the two characters. They also suggested a new scene to be added to make the story flow and give the audience of a little more understanding of the character intentions.